I once Had a girlfriend and her name was Geyzylle. She rocked my world for almost three years. I loved her to death and I thought she loved me... but sadley she was a liar and a drinker. One night I received a telephone call from Geyzylle, she asked me to come get her, she said she went to a party and now wanted to get away from there, she said it was a crazy party and she was scared. So I took the keys from my moms purse and drove out to get after she gave me directions to the place she was at. It took me an hour and forty three minute to find the place where the party was and when I got there I paked the car in front of the barn where the party was going on inside. I walked inside the barn and I looked around for Geyzylle, but I couldnt find her, I started asking around and describing her to the people I was asking whe, I loked up,becuase I heard people yelling jump. Now at that moment I knew it was geyzylle up there getting ready to jump, when i looked up she smile down at me with a beer bottle in her hand she took running start then she jumped dwn towards the croud. A group of guys were supposed to catch her, but sadley the guys were all drunk also and didnt catch, as she fell I screamed out for her not do it, but shedid jump and as soon as she relized what was going on she started screaming bloody murder and then she ht the ground. Three hours later I walked into the emergency surgery room even though I knew she had passed on, ad I saw laying there on a table, her nose had broken in three different places, her beautifull face had benn almost completly torn off by the gravel she had laded on face first, And her neck had been snapped in fifteen different ways, her limbs ere sprawled out and her body disfigured in a gruesome way. I loked away from her and started to cry, my mom walked up behind me and embraced me in a hug as I cried on her shoulder, I thought I could have prevented her from dying I could have told her not to drink...................................
That was not a made up story that is a true story, so if you know a loved one who drink heavily please show them this sad tale of my ex's and see if they will slow down on the drinking.......
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Story Numero Uno~ NO BOYS ALLOWED IN THE HOUSE
"Look you friek, I told you no...." said Ashley to a guy named Gregg.With that Ashley pushed Gregg away from herself and she walked in the opposite direction."Wait I just want your number!" He shouted out after her. Ashley paid no mind to his shout as she took off running to her house. When she walked her mom was waiting for her on the couch."Where have you been young lady, Its nearly 4:00 pm, you were supposed to be here at 2:45 pm sharp." said Ashleys mom Tatiana.
"I stayed after for drumline practice ok mother, is that ok with you." Ashley said. Then Ashley stormed up the stairs and into her room she slammed her door shut and went and flopped down on her bed. She got out her cell phone and notced she missed a call. "The numer was private, I wonder who that could have been." Ashley wondered aloud. Just then her father knocked on her door,"Come in."Ashley said in a depressed voice."Whats wrong hunny?" asked Ashleys father Tim."Ohh nothing......."Ashleys said."Ok then."Tim said as he started walking out her door."Daddy wait,there is something wrong...You see theres this guy......"Said Ashley."Uhh oh does someone have a crush?"Said Tim in a playfull and mocking voice."Well yes actually, but he's totally obsesive over me and he tried to grabb me today after school and threatend to hurt me if I didnt give him my number..." Ashley said with a sigh. "He did what? What is this guys parents names?" Tim said getting suddenly serious. "Well hes kinda is eighteen daddy so he doesnt live with his parents. But his last name is Woodwork. And I think his mothers name is Claudia."Ashley said trying to remember his mothers name."Well I am going down to the police station to see if they can find this weirdo's mom. Ok hunny so stay in this house and be safe I will be back around 10:00 pm tonight probably. See you later aligator."Tim said. "After a while crocodile. Bye Daddy be safe......" Ashley said looking worried............... "Hmmmm I wonder whas on the radio."Tim said to himself as he drove down Counsil Road. "Nothing good on to bad." He said getting a little mad aboutsomeone threatining his little girl. Tim kept driving down counsil looking at the trees along either side of him. "Man, these streets are so narrow I dont think someone else could fit along side of me....." Tim thought as he squinted his eyes searching for any other cars coming down the road ahead of him."No cars today, thats good." He thought to himself. "Life is highway, I wanna..........." Tim was singing when he peered ahead again and saw a big blue truck headed towards him." Ohh crap. Theres no way both of our trucks can fit along side eachother . I will flash my head lights to signal him to pull over a little bit." Tim thought aloud. Then he flashed his headlights three times at the other trucks to signal it of a danger coming up. "Can they not see me?" He asked himself. The other truck was headed staight at Tim's Truck. "Ohh lord they cant see me......." Tim thought. The blue truck was coming at Tim's truck full speed now with only a small gap in between the two trucks. Tim honked his horn frantically, he rolled down his window and started to wave the other truck over signaling it to get over a bit but it seemed ike who ever was driving that truck didnt pay any heed to it."Ohh god there gonna hit me."Timsaid aloud. With that last impulsive thought Tim jerked his truck right into the trees he thought were so beautifull...."Ashley!"Tatiana yelled up the stairs."Yeah mom." Ashley yelled back down."I am going to the strore Do you anything?"Tatiana asked Ashley."No mom I am good thanks though."Ashley said. "I will back in about an hour. Love you have a good time, be good and remember no boys alowed in the house......." Tatiana yelled up the stairs to Ashley."Ok mom love you to see you when you get home." Ashle said then she lay back down on her bed and fell asleep..."Hmm I dont remember leaving the car unlocked.. Thats weird." Tatiana thought to herself."Ohh well."She thought as she got in the car and started it up As she backed out of the driveway she turned on the radio. She pulled out and started down counsil road "I wonder where that husband of mine went off to." She thought aloud and then she laughed for some odd reason she just had the need to. "Hmm thats weird I see smoke up ahead ohh god I hope there wasnt a fire." She said aloud. Then she sped up driving towards the smoke.She peered up ahead lokking for the fire."Ohh my god... is that Tims truck!" She thought aloud."Why yes, yes it . And quit frankly he was a bad driver."said a mans voice coming from the back seat of her car. Tatiana slowley stopped the car. When it came to a complete stop she slowley turned her head around and then she saw him a boy was sitting in her backseat just smiling at her. The boy jumped up as soon as she tried to get out of the car and put a cloth with something on it over her mouth and nose suffocating her.Then everything went black................ Ashley woke up to her front door opening and closing."Mom is that you?"Ashley asked. No reply came, Ashley got up off her bed and grabbed a bat she kept in her room. "Mom, dad are you guys home."She yelled down the stairs.No reply came everything was dead silent, Ashley went down the stairs slowley looking around for anybody. "Mom........ Dad. You guys this isnt funny...... You are scaring me."Ashley said in little more than a whisper."I am sorry I am scaring you." A voice of a man whisperd into Ashleys ear. Then Ashley whipped around swung with the bat."Hey, hey dont hit me......."said the guy."Oh my god you scared the living crap out of me you jerk."Ashley said with a smile."I thought you knew I was coming babe."Chris said."No I didnt. Why do you think I was asleep!"Ashley said."Ohh I sorry all I did was pop in through your kitchen window.Didnt think I would scare you that bad, Sorry babe."Chris said and he hugged her."Wait.... you didnt use the front door?"Ashley said looking worried."No, I used the kitchen window like always."Chris said looking concerned."I think theres someone eles here Chris........"Ashley said.Ten she saw him.There was Gregg sitting on her couch a big butcher knife in his hand."I told you I wanted your number.... You should have just give it to me. I guess I am a friek Cuase your about to die!"Gregg said angerly.With that he got up off the coach and started walking towards Ashley and Chris."Hey man dont hurt her she didnt give her number to you becuase she is taken man by me so back of and put the knife down."Chris said moving Ashley behind him."You really think..."He laughs."That I give a shit about if she is going out with someone.....I am in love with her man in love and your just in my way!" Gregg said then he jumped at Chris hitting him squarley on the chest with the knife Ashley screamed and ran up the stairs and into her room. She locked the door and grabbed her cell phone she dialed 911 and told them what was going on. Then she heard him coming up the stairs."Ashley...... Where are you ashley? I just want to be your friend hunny dont be afraid of the man with a knife....." Gregg said in a maniacal tone of voice."Ohh I can hear you breath ashley, I feel your heartbeat along with mine. I will get you ashley if its the last thing I do."Gregg said and with that last word he swung at ashleys door with a sluge hammer reaking into it a small bit. he swung again and again until he made a hole big enough to fit his arm through then he unlocked the door from the inside and walkedin the door. Ashley had gone and hidden in a small rat like hole with a door to cover it in the back of her closet. Gregg searched the room from top to bottem and then he heard the sirens."You little bitch now your gonna get it you fucking called the cops on me!"He said frantically searching the place. Then she heard her front door open and the police come in, but at the same moment gregg opend up the rat hole door and yanked Ashley out.She yelled out "I AM UP HERE AND HE'S ABOUT TO KILL ME.""You are a little bitch you know that."Gregg said as Ashley kicked where it hurts on him. then thepolice burst in and tackled him to the floor......................................................................................................................
About Me
Hey whats up this is jazmin! I just joined teenspot not to long ago lol. I am 14 years old almost 15. I love to wrestle with my friends for fun, but yes I am a actual female wrestler on a team(for my highschool). Lets see I like to read its a habbit to go home after a brutal practice and grab a book,kick back on my sofa,grab a drink and read for a while. I am curently single,but I dont plan on being single for long lol. I am bisexual so please stop asking me thanks. I am here to meet interesting new people and learn some things that are new to me. Also I will post short stories on here on my person Space thing(I am a writer also) or some poems I love to write horrors and gore stories so please give me critisism on my comments or praise depend on if you like the story or not but do leave comments about it ok thanks a bunch,
Love,
Jazmin
Ps: I also am in my schools and and also in the njrotc so ask away
Specifics
Gender:
Female
Sexuality:
Bisexual
Relationship:
Single
Location:
United States
Birthday:
July 18, 1993
Interests
Music:
Anything with a good downbeat or tune.
Television:
Dont really watch it rather would be outside.
Movies:
Anything scary or gory
People:
My fav. People are my familey and my friends, and also my teamates Go jets!
Books:
Any type of book there is
Places:
I have lived all over the united states and want to go to paris, rome, egypt, and the carribeans
Foods:
I love anything spicy or that has to do with seafood!
Drinks:
I drink pepsi and sprite and any kind of pop, i sometimes drink suicides with a group of my buds lol
Sports:
I wrestle,play soccer,play vollyball, and watch football
You do!?
That's amazing..you're amazing!
lol, I learned some moves for freestyling but I can't do it..folkstyle, however is the only thing I know how to do.
Wow, you must be really good.
SO what if other girls dont wanna join.
It's been 2 years since I been on the team and still the only girl!
Stay on the team and raise your record..
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