What do you think ?

[RosieH1995]

hey guys , just wanna ask what do you think of my drawing , i dont mind criticism . there on the link below
http://misshirsty.deviantart.com/

[esio_trot]

Pretty fucking awesome. I would try and work on cross hatching more instead of trying to get tones through smudging. Gaining tones through smudging, especially when drawing people just makes them look bruised. Plus, learning to cross hatch is a skill more applicable to a greater variety of media.

[RosieH1995]

thanks and i will defiantly try cross hatching

Pretty fucking awesome. I would try and work on cross hatching more instead of trying to get tones through smudging. Gaining tones through smudging, especially when drawing people just makes them look bruised. Plus, learning to cross hatch is a skill more applicable to a greater variety of media.