Just wrote my first song!

[sciencefreak2014]

This is my first song and I think it could use some help. Any suggestions? Message me or something. Any and all help is greatly appreciated!

Lyrics:

I never expected this,
I never thought I’d see you again.
Cuz you walked out that door,
and I thought you were gone for sure.

So why do you keep showing up,
In the middle of my life?
It was hard enough saying goodbye,
the first time.

Is this some kind of game?
Am I the one to blame,
For getting lost in your eyes,
And being taken by your smile?
I fell for the charm,
Of being held in your arms
And I,
Fell head over heels
for you.
And now I have to face the truth.
I’m still not over you.

Sad enough,
Memories come in bits and pieces.
I’ve tried my best,
To make myself just leave ‘em.

But I can’t let go,
I can’t do it anymore.
I can’t go on pretending, forgetting, wasting and letting
Myself think I’m fine.
And I keep askin myself:

Is this some kind of game?
Am I the one to blame,
For getting lost in your eyes,
And being taken by your smile?
I fell for the charm,
Of being held in your arms
And I,
Fell head over heels
for you.
And now I have to face the truth.
I’m still not over you.

Is this some kind of game?
Am I the one to blame,
For getting lost in your eyes,
And being taken by your smile?
I fell for the charm,
Of being held in your arms
And I,
Fell head over heels
for you.
And now I have to face the truth.
I’m still not over you.

I’ll never be over you…

[channybabez15]

its really good!

[sciencefreak2014]

Thanks

its really good!

[StayForeverStrong]

Wow this is really good!!! Just needs another verse after the second chorus and this will sound really good with an acoustic guitar! I play guitar and it'd be awesome if we can collab?

[Taylor-Ann_Smith]

This is really great! You have a real talent!!!!!