These are pieces are feel aren't finished yet, but they look good as they are (in my opinion) so before i screw things up, i just want to know what you feel is missing? love it, hate it, or eh?
This one ^ is supposed to inspire hope, but i think it's leaning more towards wonder.
This one ^ is an abstract, I wasn't going anywhere with this
face and mask.jpg
This one ^ is a project that just had to include masks, but obviously i have trouble with my proportions. I like it like that though
This ^ is acrylic paint over sand for texture. I hate acrylics, but it's supposed to be a fantasy landscape. it's my least favorite and the one i need the most work on
I will say that none of this stuff is my best work, which is why it is here. And in my opinion art is subjective, everyone likes different things and i respect that. I also realize that by putting these up, i giving people freedom to speak the truth, but please explain why exactly you don't or do like it, so i can get a sense of what my art work has invoked in other people. I take my art work very seriously
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06-27-2012 11:49 PM #1
These are unfinished, but i need to know what's missing
06-29-2012 01:34 PM #2
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to the first one I would add a little more color, like those shapes or something. All the others are best left alone, they are awesome
06-29-2012 09:24 PM #3
I'm no arts expert so I'm just basing this on what I see XD I agree with the person above me ^woop^ that the first one needs more colours, probably lighter shades in the middle with the dark background. Probably the only thing lacking on your works are strong features. Like there should be something striking in a part of the artwork.
07-03-2012 01:36 PM #4
thanks what about even the last one? it seems lacking to me
07-03-2012 01:59 PM #5
The landscape one just seems a little dull. It's not bad or anything, but you didn't highlight anything, which makes it seer amateur I guess. You did say you weren't done, so just keep working and see what happens.
07-04-2012 02:48 AM #6
07-05-2012 09:24 AM #7
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the first I believe well... there are two parts, the dark and the light one. The connection seems to be the problem for me, the two parts honestly look disconnected. Maybe if you could live the background up with colors, or use dark colors on the straight line... that should do it. The second and third should stay as it is depending on your idea if you wanted it to look naive. If not, I would use shades, shadows and light cause it would look more realistic. And the last looks very creative. Again, depending on your choice of course. Though I would definitely use shadows and sharp edges here. Then it would be perfect. Looking at these, I get the style you might be using. With passionate strong colors and straight to the point. That's just my assumption. I like it a lot. Wish you could post the best work as well.
My best advice would be keep up the work. Experiment, try tons of techniques. You won't regret it.
08-31-2012 01:04 PM #8
I really like the first one, actuallyHello... I'm Red
09-01-2012 07:14 AM #9