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[n0vembergirl]

hey so i wrote this poem describing that painting The Scream.. don't have much experience so please share what you think

The wailing face weeps a story untold,
As the eyes scream pain, dark fissures unfold.
Crevices scatter shells of humanity,
Chasms of regret slope to insanity.
A cold sun smothers the deserted world,
Like hues deranges on corrupted mural.
The figure shudders, dark silhouette shaking,
His blatant grimace paints death's awakening;
He sways on a bridge - more spirit than man,
A soulless ghoul drowning on frozen land.
On one side pain, one the other sorrow,
While shadows of the past stalk tomorrow.
Pale fingers clutch a face shrieking despair,
When his intrusive scream blackens the air.

[julialovesgiraffes]

If you're not that experienced, let alone if you were itms great! :3