Zombie poem... opinion on this poem...

[iamtheshadows]

Blood thirsty
flesh craving
skin tearing
bone crunching
life taking
this is what i wanna do
take your life
crush your bones
rip your skin
eat your flesh
drink your blood
becoming crazed
im in a daze
your life is my life
to take a soul
it increases my love
for fresh fleash,
zombie is what you say
superior race is what i am
we will dominate the world
youre either food
or youre looking for it....

[julialovesgiraffes]

I actually love, creepy and ...... you know! Lol I'm just sick, lol but I can't say anything since all my poems are about pain and suffering. xD But I like all the actions, maybe a lil more description in it, it's make it more chilly and the details would deffinatly send tingles down your spine. But I like it Λ.Λ Sorry I write to much :p