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    As I stare into the mirror a black shadow flashes behind me,
    I turn around to see the shower curtain falling to the ground,
    meshing into a large mass,
    spindely black arms reach and wrap around my legs,
    I try to scream but an inky black substance is dripping from the vent,
    It wraps around my throat,
    shoving it's way into my mouth,
    enveloping my eyes in a sea of darkness,
    when I open my eyes, the strands thrust into my head,
    forcing dark images through my brain,
    first they fill my head,
    traveling deeper and deeper,
    to my heart and my soul,
    so much death, so much pain, filling my mind,
    tearing me apart slowly, cell by cell,
    my knees give out, my body shudders,
    my eyes flash from the bathroom to the invasive black substance,
    black tears stream down my face tainted with blood,
    the ebony waves disappear,
    failing yet again to take over my body.

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    wow, that is such an amazing piece!!! its so descripitive i could picture everything, and i got chills down my spine!!!

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    Lol thank you, just another one of messed up dreams that I have xD

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    well what ever it is, keep posting it!!!! i would luv to read more!

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    Lol I have been for a while, don't plan on stopping until they do xD

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    can you send some of your poems to me plz if you add me as a friend i will give you my e-mail

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    Well guys honestly is this just me or the poem does remind everyone else of this scene from Spider Man... Please please please people give me one original idea to read JUST ONE????????/

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    I wouldn't know, seeing as I have only watched bits and pieces of spider man and have found it boring.

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