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    the way i feel, this feeling inside..
    its burning me to ashes why can i not fly?
    my wings were ripped harshly off my back.
    i am falling right to the solid hard grass.
    i feel like crying but most of all dying..
    for no happiness makes me truly happy.
    for the blue skys are turning gray
    please rescue me and make me saved.
    im screaming can you not hear me?
    this voice is fading.
    so desperately crying..
    please PLEASE
    crawling amongst the dirt filled with hurt begging for mercy.
    blood covering my face do you not see?
    Kitten

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    ....
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    Nicee.

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    thanks
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    it can touch the heart and soul at the same time.i think its true spirit of a poem

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    thank you
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    I just want to say, it means a lot that people read my poems, these come form the heart and means everything so thank you so much for reading them!!!
    Kitten

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    Kitten

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    what a great poem, lots of emotion,keep writing!(:

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    thank you!!!
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