Some drawn art. Constructive criticism?

[FilterDreaming]

They look a bit different in real life as a am scanning A3 sheets on an A4 scanner. So sorry they are slightly warped. Anyway how can I improve these?

The witch (I have only started the first layer of colour so I know that needs improving. Any more ideas?)


Alice 1


Alice 2


Alice 3

[baby_gurl_4u]

I think they're cute. You might want to consider doing them in a different media, possibly digitally or even in acrylics. Also, you should use anatomy references, there are quite a few things that are off with your body proportions and anatomically they aren't correct. That can be done by finding local life drawing classes in which a model is provided or if there isn't anything like that close enough to you, you can try using online references for practice. They will help but nothing beats the real thing. I'm currently in art school and I do professional work as well and honestly, there's nothing like working from a live model. It's really relaxing as well.

[FilterDreaming]

I think they're cute. You might want to consider doing them in a different media, possibly digitally or even in acrylics. Also, you should use anatomy references, there are quite a few things that are off with your body proportions and anatomically they aren't correct. That can be done by finding local life drawing classes in which a model is provided or if there isn't anything like that close enough to you, you can try using online references for practice. They will help but nothing beats the real thing. I'm currently in art school and I do professional work as well and honestly, there's nothing like working from a live model. It's really relaxing as well.

I know they have proportion issues as the references I used for these images were pictures of monster high and delilah noir dolls. I my scanner is also scans slightly weird. they look better in person. But thank you.

With media's I am contemplating trying to use water colours.