Its the itch...

[Johanne17]

Well... I thought I would give it a shot - mostly for the laughs of it, because I am aware, that my english is not well enough to write poetry in.

This poem was originally written in danish and I did try to make a 'raw' translation. I am not at all satisfied with it, and I would love comments to improve it, polish it, make it better.


Its the itch

in the car
on the beach
in the shower
on the bike
in the church
on the floor

with the hands
with the bottle
with the soap
with the saddle
with the candle
with the brush

wet, wet, wet
its the itch
its the itch
its the itch

on the horse
in the bus
on the fence
in the classroom
on the run
in the kitchen

with the bumping
with the rubbing
with the pole
with the pencil
with the pants
with the spoon

wet, wet, wet
its the itch
its the itch
its the itch

in my dreams
on my bed
in my head
on my back
in my fantasies
on my knees

with his hands
with his lips
with his tounge
with his hips
with his tools
with his stick

wet, wet, wet,
its the itch
its the itch
its the itch

[XbritXhardcoreX]

thats,..interesting.

[WiseWoman]

haha, I really like it.

[L0stS0ul]

Lmao... this is indecent

[richteen92]

Rofl, I really like it!!! They need to make a song about it!!!