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  1. 07-29-2004 11:40 AM #1
    Sapphire
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    Default Just A Poem About Life...tell me if you like it

    Life

    Life is not a fairy tale
    nor is it a dream,
    life is what you make of it.

    life cannot be taken lightly
    or too seriously
    live for today, not for tomorrow
    if tomorrow never comes
    you won't have the chance
    to say
    I love you, thankyou, hello, or goodbye

    Life cannot be perfect
    now will it be fair.
    make the most of what you have,
    you cannot have everything you want
    so at least
    want everything you have.

    Remember the moments
    that take your breath away.
    Live for the nights you won't remember
    with the friends you'll never forget.

    Life is not a fairy tale,
    nor is it a dream
    so make the best of it
    have the time of your life.
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  2. 07-29-2004 09:23 PM #2
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    awesome poem!! if you post anymore i dont get on her alot.. so it would be awesome if you could email om to me... pedersenj33@yahoo.com thanx :-)
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  3. 07-29-2004 09:38 PM #3
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    i liked it. especially this
    "you cannot have everything you want
    so at least
    want everything you have"
    i very much enjoyed it. Im looking forward to reading some other stuff.
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  4. 07-30-2004 02:26 AM #4
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    i liked it. look at your spelling. one part you put "Life cannot be perfect
    now will it be fair." Instead of "now" i think you meant nor.
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  5. 07-30-2004 03:05 AM #5
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    Good. Definately enjoyed it
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  6. 07-30-2004 10:21 AM #6
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    thanx, glad people enjoyed it. and thanx for telling me about my spelling mistake lol
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  7. 05-12-2006 01:04 PM #7
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    WOAH!! neat lil doodad-ee poem yu got there. [even though ii like poems dat rhyme]] it was still awesomely awesome and true!!
    [x iim not conceited!!]]
    ii just liike takin pix of maiself =]
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  8. 05-15-2006 06:33 PM #8
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    wow. great poem!! i loved it.
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  9. 05-16-2006 10:13 AM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by datAsiin_liifeguard
    WOAH!! neat lil doodad-ee poem yu got there. [even though ii like poems dat rhyme]] it was still awesomely awesome and true!!
    Heheh. Just like trolls...
    Anywho, the poem was very good. Congratulations on your amazing achievement
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  10. 05-20-2006 08:28 AM #10
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    Hmm. Just a message, not a poem. A very valuable message, mind.
    Pathos, piety, courage, — they exist, but are identical, and so is filth. Everything exists, nothing has value.
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  11. 05-21-2006 03:06 PM #11
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    i love this poem it is so tru u gotta make life ur own and not make u ur life

    if u get that

    hey check out some of my poems and leave commits

    thankz
    (today is the tomorow we worried 'bout yesterday)

    (alone i can never lose
    when i never wanted to win)

    e-mail me!

    visit my site!
    my piczo websites
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  12. 05-22-2006 09:13 PM #12
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    I really liked your poem. to bad my life could never be something I live for that day. it just goes and comes. i do know that the best day was Yesturday!!
    because I've made it this far.
    Deziree
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  13. 05-22-2006 10:08 PM #13
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    I love it,it is a great poem....
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  14. 05-23-2006 07:10 AM #14
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    pathetic and obvious
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