No title.. suggestions? ( i've written maybe 3 poems about feelings for someone ever. These aren't as nice..) This is one, I'll post some more if the reaction isn't so bad.
here comes the night, says the child clenching her bear.
'go away' she thinks, trying to escape his terrifying stare.
He rises to his feet and walks slowly over toward her.
Insuing fear into the girl, he smiles 'come here baby sister'.
Paralyzed with fear she tries to rise.
He stops towering over her, staring straight into her eyes.
'where's mom' she whispers, as she attempts to slide away.
'why do you do this to me'? she says, but he doesn't know what to say.
This makes the boy mad, 'shut up' he kicks her with all his weight.
'you're worthless kid'.
It hurts.. but she doesn't let herself cry.
Crying shows you're weak, she thought it was a rule to live by.
It was better this way, if she cried it would last longer.
She screamed once, even though she knew no one could help her.
He laughed quietly, and left her there.
She lay there thinking.. she wished she would die..no one would care.
She slept on the cold floor that night..bleeding.. waiting.
Her mom never came, once again she had a tantrum and began screaming.
'God, why don't you let me die' she says over and over in her head.
Thoughts flooded her mind, as she gave up on trying to get to bed.
This is the end, she's giving up.
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02-12-2002 02:59 PM #1LiVeNlEtDiEGuest
I'll post some of mine, but ... theyre not 'nice'
02-12-2002 03:27 PM #2Breathe In Bleed OutGuest
nice..like it..post s'more
02-12-2002 03:29 PM #3Stiu1atorGuestCrying shows you're weak
02-12-2002 03:50 PM #4SparkiGuest
02-12-2002 03:52 PM #5LiVeNlEtDiEGuest
02-13-2002 10:14 AM #6Lost-ConscienceGuest
:thumbup: Very good.
02-13-2002 01:39 PM #7LiVeNlEtDiEGuest
.... okay, okay I just wanted to use the smileys... <-- I just like that lil guy.
02-13-2002 03:17 PM #8LisaGuest
awh too sad well written though..
02-13-2002 06:42 PM #9LiVeNlEtDiEGuest
02-14-2002 01:28 PM #10ChacotayGuest
good, but one question, is it about incest or physical abuse?
02-14-2002 01:58 PM #11LiVeNlEtDiEGuest
physical abuse. I've never written about sexual abuse, or incest.
02-14-2002 10:20 PM #12ChacotayGuest
i'm sorry to read that, its got to be painful...
02-26-2002 08:10 PM #13demonic_smurfGuest
It was sad but I thought that it had really good rythm.
07-22-2012 02:38 PM #14
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Sounds awesome. I love stuff like that.