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Old 02-15-2006, 03:47 PM   #1
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Default For the One...who means everything

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A box of memories,
I would give away just to be near you,
A Rose, a toy, two cinema tickets,
a badge, a lolipop, a debs invite, photographs,
All mean so little without you here beside me.
Pictures, snap shots of you,
Time's of lust, attraction, love, heat, infatuation,
Flood through my mind like a sea washing all over me,
I'm Floating at just the thought of you,
Heart breaking, Mind numbing, Body shaking feelings,
Combined with beautiful sounds of music,
Feel like a slide show of Ectasy, Nirvana, Harmony, Peace,
From the world I exist in, where things I do,
Mean Fuck all without you.
Monotonous, Insignificant, every day life,
On Autopilot, a life of not living,
Till I see you again.

A rainbow, I try to reach, but I never get there,
2 steps forward, 3 steps back,
A hill, steep, so hard, trying,
I fall, I stumble,
I get there...Your Gone.
A star, I will never ever touch, never reach,
Stuck in the same place, Outcast,
Isolated...from You.
I keep walking, you walk at the same pace,
but so far away that I'll never get where you are,
At the same time, same moment,
So as I can Kiss you, hold you,
Feel your breath on my skin,
Hear you speak, see your eyes,your lips,
your Beauty.
Words cannot describe my distress but I try,
It sounds so tacky but it's true....I do... I Love you.

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Old 02-15-2006, 04:13 PM   #2
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difrent but nice
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Old 02-15-2006, 04:16 PM   #3
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Thank a mil
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Old 02-15-2006, 04:58 PM   #4
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i like it alot
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Old 02-16-2006, 07:39 PM   #5
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i like it too
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Old 02-16-2006, 11:52 PM   #6
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wow, that about sums it all up dont it!!! I like it, it says almost everthing i have been thinkin'!! lol!
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Old 02-17-2006, 06:18 AM   #7
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Awh that's so sweet you guys thanx a mil Really appreciated xxx
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Old 02-18-2006, 02:20 AM   #8
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i realy like it lots
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