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Old 02-14-2006, 06:55 PM   #1
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Heart Eyes Some of my poems.

I have a few different types of poems here for you...

Couplets:

"Untitled"

Her arms are frail, her legs are weak
Where's the life she tends to seek?

"Signs of Sadness"

Look into his pale face
Not one sign, not one trace

"Better Off"

Her heart rings with that golden sound
She has the heart she lacked, but found


Poem containing onomatopoeia:

"Untitled"


You hear the bell, inside your mind
"Ding, Ding"
That's the thought you lagged to find
It was so much easier, to sit inside that room
Well...Until you couldn't consume
The ideas of others
Not the thoughts or tears of anyone
Didn't know who you were, when you pulled out that gun
"Sheesh", I'm so glad you didn't pull the trigger
So glad that they're all alive
So glad that you didn't take that nose dive


Poem containing personification:
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"Journal"

When I open her, she speaks to me
Tells me to express myself in all ways possible
When I close her, she's not through
She reminds me about the right thing to do
When I fail, I must tell her my guilt
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Old 02-14-2006, 07:23 PM   #2
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they are okay i like the one called Journal
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Old 02-14-2006, 07:31 PM   #3
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Thanks.

Meh...

I really enjoy writing free verse poems...

I probably wouldn't post them here, but w/e.

There are different types up there cause I have this
poetry project that requires different types.

So yeah...
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Old 02-15-2006, 01:24 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by OnE_BEAUTIFUL_DrEaM
I have a few different types of poems here for you...

Couplets:

"Untitled"

Her arms are frail, her legs are weak
Where's the life she tends to seek?

"Signs of Sadness"

Look into his pale face
Not one sign, not one trace

"Better Off"

Her heart rings with that golden sound
She has the heart she lacked, but found


Poem containing onomatopoeia:

"Untitled"


You hear the bell, inside your mind
"Ding, Ding"
That's the thought you lagged to find
It was so much easier, to sit inside that room
Well...Until you couldn't consume
The ideas of others
Not the thoughts or tears of anyone
Didn't know who you were, when you pulled out that gun
"Sheesh", I'm so glad you didn't pull the trigger
So glad that they're all alive
So glad that you didn't take that nose dive


Poem containing personification:
[/b]

"Journal"

When I open her, she speaks to me
Tells me to express myself in all ways possible
When I close her, she's not through
She reminds me about the right thing to do
When I fail, I must tell her my guilt
did YOU make them.... in math class??? lolzz. just kidding. their pretty good... i guess.
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