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Old 02-14-2006, 05:58 PM   #1
baby_gurlskizzez
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Default One of my poems.

The Night You Left

the sun took the moon,
like your kiss took my soul.
your leaving so soon
why do you have to go?

endless nights and sleepless dreams,
and i was in them all.
we would picnic by the bluest streams,
and i could always feel myself fall.

many memories and many laughs,
but he wants you for himself.
i hope god will take care of you,
give you a better life and better health.

remember me cause i'll remember you,
everynight for you i'll pray.
forever mending, never ending,
i'll love you til more than my very last day.
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Old 02-14-2006, 06:02 PM   #2
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i wrote this at skool so i dunno how it sounds! tell me whut yu think k!!
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