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Old 02-14-2006, 05:09 PM   #1
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Default song i wrote in math class.

lolzz. here it's called dont put me through this.
here it iz:
i need to go my way you need to turn around and dont look back i want you to see i dont want you even though you want me cuz every time i turn around you throw my heart on2 the ground you expect me to heal so quickly with all the stuff you put me through but you know what i just realized you need me, i dont need you.
chorus- whoa whoa whoa step away or you'll get hurt. we both will. i need to go my way, and you need to turn around and dont look back. don't put me through this.

how waz it. it's not done. give me sum ideas. rate it so far 1-10 and give me ideas dont say anything like it's ur song.. ya kno???? so jus give me ideas and maybe i'll use sum of them in my own words.
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Old 02-14-2006, 05:29 PM   #2
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get music for it. I like it soo much I am going to steal it and us it as my own
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Old 02-14-2006, 05:43 PM   #3
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Is your name Burt Bacharach by any chance???
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Old 02-14-2006, 05:58 PM   #4
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Old 02-14-2006, 09:32 PM   #5
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Is your name Burt Bacharach by any chance???
um... no. wait r u talking 2 me???
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Old 02-14-2006, 09:46 PM   #6
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um... no. wait r u talking 2 me???
I think they're saying that you either copied the whole song, or pieces of it.

And, I suggest you listen in math class...

Good grades = Good schools = Good future.

That's my opinion, I didn't even need to read the song.
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Old 02-14-2006, 10:25 PM   #7
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no i didn't copy nething of ne1's song. also wut's the point to pay attention evry1 waz talking in there so i couldnt work if i tried. plus we were just doing worksheets we were going to finish on thursday. plus i could have did that "independant work" at home. so yea.
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Old 02-15-2006, 04:03 AM   #8
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Shouldn't you've been studying maths?
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Old 02-15-2006, 04:37 AM   #9
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Pshhht. I don't know anyone that actually does maths in maths class.
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Old 02-15-2006, 07:22 AM   #10
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Pshhht. I don't know anyone that actually does maths in maths class.

Anyone who wants to pass will pay attention, don't be retarded.
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Old 02-15-2006, 07:26 AM   #11
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i never listen in maths...and im in top set so :p to you
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Old 02-15-2006, 01:21 PM   #12
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i dont need to listen.. i just copy down the notes learn them myself and do my homework. and guess wut i have a b. so yea. plus they were just doing worsheets the sub wasn't teaching anything he wasn't even talking.
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Old 02-19-2006, 06:23 PM   #13
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Old 02-19-2006, 10:27 PM   #14
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This went from telling this girl how her song was to talking about how kids should pay attention in math class.

And if you learn it on your own, isn't that doing at home? I'd rather do it at school & write the song at home.
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Old 02-19-2006, 10:40 PM   #15
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Meh, average.
Too repetitive.
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