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Old 02-13-2006, 06:54 PM   #1
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hey i wrote this poem is it a good V-day poem or should i toss it to the curb:
what is love but a lustful feeling
what is love but a restless mind
do you say i love you with a kiss good night or the solitude of a weary mind
what is love but a willing heart
what is love do you say sweetheart
love is more then a passing glance its a wonderful feeling
the birds call or the dove's coo
what is love but a passing moment spent with you
all i know is i love you
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Old 02-13-2006, 06:55 PM   #2
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I like the hearts at the end.
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Old 02-13-2006, 07:02 PM   #3
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hee thanx
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Old 02-13-2006, 07:07 PM   #4
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I like the hearts at the end.
Me too. It gives it something a little extra.
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Old 02-13-2006, 07:18 PM   #5
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thanx believe it or not i wrote it myself
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Old 02-13-2006, 07:22 PM   #6
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You don't know sarcasm when it stares at your face.
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Old 02-13-2006, 07:25 PM   #7
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okay i re read it i didn't catch it the first time sorry.
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Old 02-13-2006, 07:28 PM   #8
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Goody.
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Old 02-13-2006, 07:40 PM   #9
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Old 02-13-2006, 07:41 PM   #10
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"rolleyes"
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Old 02-15-2006, 02:37 PM   #11
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I like the hearts at the end.
I don't even like the hearts, making the whole thing the worst post in the history of teenspot.
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Old 02-19-2006, 02:32 AM   #12
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Old 03-02-2006, 07:03 PM   #13
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