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Old 11-07-2009, 01:05 AM   #1
Lady187um4yah
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Arrow first poem since i was about 11 years old

You are so hateful
cheating on me by my enemies
creating all this fake love
hope
blending in with denial
I still love you
cherish you
and sometimes...hate you!
but were still together
through the good,bad, and ugly
by you
becoming...
Lorenzo Carraby

This was my first poem about love for nearly three years now because i used to write about stuff of living in compton with myy father for a few years and such.
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