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imported_darkraven
07-09-2003, 09:14 PM
I don’t feel right today.
I don’t feel right any day.
I’m not the same, something’s wrong.
Emotions are everywhere.
Feelings are confused.
You make me happy, you make me sad.
I lost a piece of myself in you.
I found a piece of you in me.
I lost my soul, I lost my life.
Now give me back my knife.

love_sweet_love
07-09-2003, 09:45 PM
I liked it. It sounds like you're going througn the same emotional turmoil that I am. Nice to know that I'm not alone (assuming the poem is about yourself)

ice_angel0587
07-09-2003, 11:18 PM
Was the rhyming of the last to lines intentional? Or not?

It seemed awkward to me, but of course that's just me.