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TheGunnersDream
05-30-2003, 12:15 PM
Not so much a poem... Just more of a thought..(?)

Locked in this dollhouse world,
Having my freedoms served on a tray,
My dreams taken out with the trash,
Did you actually expect me to "okay" this?
Locked in this tainted idea,
You left the door of opportunity wide open.

TheGunnersDream
05-31-2003, 05:42 PM
Well..you see..when others hold you down.. You will slip away.. E.G.. Like sand through your fingers..

-YOu wouldn't find trouble if your parents set you free..it's when they try to hold you down that the door of opportunity is opened.

See?:)

TheGunnersDream
05-31-2003, 05:51 PM
Heh, I know..I am confusing..:p Thanks for your comments:D It wasnt' really a poem.. just a quick, to the point..thought.*shrug*

Eyeless
06-28-2003, 04:01 PM
As a thought, it's all right.