Don't ask me why I love you
Please don't ask me why I care
Because for some reason I can't help it
I'm always wishing you were there
Don't question my emotions
Don't wonder if i'm true
I've told you now, I love you so
But it seems questioning is all you do
You told me that you loved me
So I confessed my self, came out
But you just want to prove me wrong
And 'why?' is all I want to shout
Please stop wondering why I wish for you
Don't ask me why your my choice
You're completely perfect to me
Can' t you hear it in me cringing voice?
So please don't ask again
I've told you all I know
You're perfection in my eyes
And that's the reson I love you so

*cough terrible cough* Yeah, I know. Anyway, some constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Yes, it's based on personal experience...I guess that's only the half of it though, if that.

I like "cringing voice" but there doesn't seem to be enough imagery in the piece. I don't know... I'm a big fan of figurative language. But it's pretty good. Keep writing!

it's very good! it is a little common, but you took a sort of common topic and made it different. good job.