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imported_Krissy
03-06-2003, 12:04 AM
Wow, it's been awhile, sorry guys~I'll try to catch up and read as many posts as possible~hope you all have had a good week~I'm a lil' rusty on writing~so I'll give it a shot, don't be too critical;) haha;) anyway, here it goes:

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My eyes sparkle,
I wish you could see,
you, the boy next door,
mean so much more to me,

My smile brightens,
I wish you would know,
you, the romantic I dreamt,
bring me down when you go,

My words ramble,
I wish you could understand,
you, my closest friend,
have no idea where I stand,

My heart aches,
I wish you would realize,
you, a simple young boy,
is so much more in a girl's eyes,

My knees shake,
I wish I could come to grips,
you, yet only in my dreams,
would press upon my soft pink lips. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

HHhmmmm....I dunno...tell me what you think~i'm out~

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ice_angel0587
03-07-2003, 03:33 PM
I love it, I just got used to a your other poems, like the style. This is well different. But none-the-less wonderful.

imported_ticia
03-08-2003, 12:10 PM
Agreed. Very good and welcome back. :)