Hope,hate
Deathbed staredown
Critical state
Helpless and hellbound

Struggle, fate
The casket closes
A little too late
It's covered in roses

Sorrow, tears
Gone forever
After all these years
Let go of the lever

Anger, fears
Another day wasted
Drink a few beers
That's what started the hatred

hhhmmm...short...fast...I liked it for the most part...the rhyming was on, but it seemed kinda...I dunno..."corny?"...like you were just looking for something to rhyme with some of them...but I could be totally wrong~I liked the message~good job~i'm out~

wow - luv it!

its good
lol.. it reminds me of the jane's brother and his band on daria. their lyrics. hehe. (that's not a bad thing fyi)

Dude! Jane's brother is awesome! lol..He's hot too :P