Let’s believe
In simple life
No grieve
No lurking strife
A smile
So greatly shown
A hug
You never lone
Where children play
Most delight
Free, loving, gay
Eyes bright
And forever be
With emotion
A palace we
Give devotion

-by me, julie

its alright.. i really dont understand what exactly you are saying but its your writing and as long as it expresses you then its great.