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imported_Julioly
01-16-2003, 08:41 PM
Be the actress
Steal the show
Walking airless
Where you go
Strike a pose
Show off your smile
Lips of rose
You're in style
Eyes that glitter
Curves that sway
You're never bitter
Loved all day
-by me, julie

Canadianpimp
01-16-2003, 08:59 PM
Nice poem. It had some nice flow to it.

imported_wee/man!
01-17-2003, 09:20 AM
Even though I can't relate to it, the poem was well done.

HeAvEnLy-SeNt
01-17-2003, 10:05 AM
Different, but interesting. Well done.....

mandy778
01-17-2003, 07:17 PM
Yea I definitely can't relate to this one, but I really like how it all flows together. ;) Nice job.

~Pisces~
01-17-2003, 10:49 PM
nice rythem to it...concise but meaningful...:)

imported_Julioly
01-17-2003, 11:25 PM
ok thanks. lol... happy peoms not popular around here? oh well, I mainly wrote it for myself, but glad you all liked it

JustJen
01-18-2003, 11:28 AM
hmmm.....I like it, but then again...it's kinda talking about the materialistic points of being a woman. I guess if that's what makes YOU proud to be a woman, then go you, but I'm glad to be a woman for a lot different reasons than that. but it IS a well written poem :)

imported_Julioly
01-18-2003, 07:49 PM
pssh you

JustJen
01-19-2003, 11:37 AM
lol, don't be like that! cuz it really is a good poem!