This is so depressing
This sudden expression of fear
These pills are slowly helping
My mind become full and clear

This is so hateful
This pretty face smashed in the ground
Your words are so ungrateful
But I’m sure you’ll come around

This is so expressive
This angry fist in my face
Now I’m a manic depressant
But I’m still stuck in your embrace

This is so painful
This ache in my heart and soul
I used to be so careful
Now you’ve taken full control

This is so tragic
This girl stuck in love’s small traps
You’ve used your wisdom and black magic
To make me give up and collapse

This is so distressing
This razor stuck in my wrist
Somehow this ends up as a blessing
I know that I’ll be missed

It kind of scares me.....

It's kinda scary...yeah....but it's really really really good!!! Great job!!

I liked it...didn't move me too much, somehow, but a couple of the stanzas were pretty powerful.

Very Scary...but in a good way!

lol Ya..I agree it's pretty scary but eh..oh well. I write scary poems. I usually write poems about stuff that's not really happening in my life. Dunno..it just seems to come easier to me.Thanks for the comments on my scary poem lol

~Mandy~

Aww thanks..I love your poems too! :)


~MaNdY~