enough of this life sucks and i hate it
enough of the depressed children too young to understand it
enough of the copycats and mimics of the 21st century

why can't a majority of us just be happy?



*just made up by Dawnie Laurie!*

Hmm...I really liked it, don't quite know why. It is very forceful and direct, guess that is a reason. I can imagine some singer with societally charged lyrics belting this out in a protest song or something...then again, I am weird. Anyhow, very nice, I commend you :)

I am not a "professional" in this department. But that is ok.. cuz i like what i said... you see... you have to have the people guessing on everything... its what i call... VAGUE POETRY.
Some i have read are actually good. But the PURPOSE is to make the person want you to write more, have that person or people thinking.. and then move on.
I mean... once i come up with a poem that is about 5 pages long... i will return your request and let you know.. but it was something short on purpose.

Thank you.

Originally posted by UnicornDream
Hmm...I really liked it, don't quite know why. It is very forceful and direct, guess that is a reason. I can imagine some singer with societally charged lyrics belting this out in a protest song or something...then again, I am weird. Anyhow, very nice, I commend you :)

Thank you Unicorn... i appreciate it very much!!! I see where you are coming from though.. you are not weird at all. (trust me! :) )

Thank you.