Running away again
Retreating deep inside
Hiding my anger
No one to guide
Lost inside myself
No answers to be found
My eyes reveal the hurt so deep
My heart sinks to the ground
Everywhere I turn
Only leads to dead ends
My family, blind to my pain
And I'm falling without friends
How must I move on
When I can't find my way
The confusion and pain
I feel must be wanting to stay.
Love must be hidden well
For feeling it I do not
Instead I feel the lack there-of
Now this I feel a lot.
My heart begins to numb
My mind blocks out the past
I try and move straight forward
But I don't seem to move fast
I feel stuck in rewind
I'm being pulled in quicker
Please help me escape before I die
I feel the knots grow thicker.

another of the best poems i've read!!!

have you tried to get published?

wow.
I was trying to quote a part that was my favorite but I couldn't make up my mind!
I agree with Chacotay, get published! If you want a head start, look into Poetry.com .
You can enter a poem on there and they'll mail you and tell you if you'll be in their next book or not. I've gotten in 2 so far. It's really great!

*claps* I agree with people above. hehe. And poetry.com rocks. Gotta agee there! ^.^ Keep writing Hiddensmile, hey what's your real name btw? (if you don't mind me asking...)

Brianna....and thanks guys, I feel really honored that you feel I'm that good!