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SnowMonkey
12-03-2002, 11:07 PM
I have a knot in my stomach
It's the screams I hold inside
I do not want to show my hurt
Though they beg me not to hide.
I do not wish to disturb the peace
By letting out all my pain
I want to stay inside myself
Though my energy begins to drain.
I hear the yelling in my head
The things I'd like to shout
But every time I think I'm ready,
The words, they won't come out.
You probably think me nearly perfect
Though perfect I'm far from
I feel as if I'm going crazy
My mind begins to numb.
I have a knot in my stomach
The screams I try and hide
I wish I knew how to make it go
But a part of me has died.

Chacotay
12-04-2002, 09:03 PM
-I wish I knew how to make it go
But a part of me has died.-
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best part

excellent poem

Ski
12-06-2002, 07:51 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by HiddenSmile
I hear the yelling in my head
The things I'd like to shout
But every time I think I'm ready,
The words, they won't come out.


^^^^^ This one is my fave.

I really think everyone can relate to this.You'd be amazed.
GOOD JOB!

augie
12-06-2002, 10:45 PM
Originally posted by HiddenSmile
I have a knot in my stomach
It's the screams I hold inside
I do not want to show my hurt
Though they beg me not to hide.
I do not wish to disturb the peace
By letting out all my pain


I love that part!! Omg! It's sooo brilliant! Keep writing!

SnowMonkey
12-07-2002, 01:58 PM
Thank you guys!!!

Ski
12-07-2002, 06:30 PM
LOL Hidden smile, I love the Chair surfing picture! That's great!

SnowMonkey
12-08-2002, 09:20 AM
Thanks!! I thought it was hilarious, so I had to use it for an avy.....which is what it was made for....but you know what I'm saying, right?

Heheh.

CrazedLunatic
12-08-2002, 02:47 PM
awesome job!I love it!!!