A sea of flames is in the offing
************************But while our sky burns our affection
**********As our hearts breathe
From the body heat
******************************The whole world spins upside down
But I can read your lips
***********Right-side up
******************************And when you leave
The sky becomes black with a pale & lonely moon
*******************My heart freezes into
The cold blue with my eyes losing focus
****Stomach aches
*********Apetite hungers
And my bed becomes empty
***************************************Without your share
*****************So I'll enjoy the touch
**When we snuggle
******************************Enjoyt the dream
When we don't
***Love in your eyes---is a RemedY
As you are my MelodY

nice. not to be mean, i dont like the asterisks though, only because it was hard for me to read it. but above that i really thought the work was good. i like the words, the lyrics, the non ryhme sceme. very good. write more for me to read and comment on