* Unloved *

My head lay upon your chest,
And my hot tears fell upon your warm flesh.
You held me tight within your embrace,
But you couldn’t bare to see the pain upon my face.
I should have listened to the emptiness of your sweet words,
But I felt too much for you, that my heart never heard.
You stroked my back, as you told me her name,
The hope I held inside put me to shame.
I should have known it was too good to be true,
But I just so badly wanted to be loved by you.

This poem is short and sweet, but it is how it happened.....

Very true actually and just about the way that it happened.....
It's horrible that you put so much trust into someone, only to find out that it had been broken or the fact that you were lead to believe something other than the truth....

this is a very nice poem! i like it alot! GOOD Job!!!!
MArtY*

Thankz guys, your replies means heaps to me, for a while i thought this poem would be yet another un-read post, so thankz again...

this ws goot..I read a lot of the stuff posted here but I dont reply much cause i miss the oldies...but yeah I liked this one...it was short but showed emotion :moo:

Thank you sooo much....