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don
07-22-2002, 03:15 PM
Tired of Normalville

I’m tired of being a pretty boy
tired of being my girls toy
tired of being so god damn nice
and always the one whose sacrificing
I'm tired of being so mature
tired of doing all your chores
tired of standing here with mom
i think it is now time to move on
I'm tired of all life’s shit
I'm tired of putting up with it
tired of little bros and sises
and all of grandma’s reminisces
tired of grandpa’s story again
tired of living in a play pen
tired of having no free will
tired of being stuck in normalville...
I’m tired of walking on trash less streets
tired of sleeping in clean sheets
tired of always smelling good
and always doing what i should
I'm tired of not being on my own
tired of living in mom and dad’s home
tired of waking and going to school
and being everyone’s tool
I'm tired of being beat up in gym class
and the permanent kick me sign on my ass
tired of a stupid job with lame pay
and working 60 million hours each day
I'm tired of being in without friends on the weekends
tired of waking up and my dream was pretend
tired of sticking my head out the window sill
and praying to fall down and out of normalville.

midnite ocean
07-22-2002, 05:20 PM
hey that was really awesome. i dont even have any tips except your rythm went a bit off every now and then. but it still sounded awesome.

bitter rose
07-23-2002, 01:27 PM
That poem is awesome, no joke. Yeah, the rhyming wasn't quite perfect, but yet, who's really looking? Rhyme stuff doesn't matter. Poem's awesome. You are really good at writing.

don
07-23-2002, 04:21 PM
everyone on here is so flattering. yeah the rhym sounds off but i wrote this to music, like punk rock. so the beat sounds off without the music, but it sounds even better on guitar. thanks for your comments

don
07-24-2002, 11:18 PM
i'm glad u like the poem and i'm happier u can relate to it. i think if i can relate to poem i can help them, this is like a "whatever"
poem. i'm glad u like it

trueflowerchild
07-25-2002, 12:40 AM
"I'm tired of being in without friends on the weekends
tired of waking up and my dream was pretend
tired of sticking my head out the window sill
and praying to fall down and out of normalville."


I really like these lines! This poem is one that i can really really really relate to... I hate living in a town where nothing goes on, I hate going to a school where my existance is only known because of roll call at the begining of class. I do have "friends" but I dont go places with them im never invited.... normalicy is what so many people want... but some people have it and dont want it... weird huh?
MArty*