if i should fall into a hole of empty exsistance would you be there to rescue me from drowning?
or would you abandon me in my dispair?
when i trip over my own foot and fall face down in my own blood
will you be there to pick me up and rebuild me?
will you help me through my pain and sorrow or ignore these feelings that i keep locked away?
when i am screaming to this mute world
will you hear me and heal my wounds?
will you fill my emptiness with thoughts of love and hope when the only world i know is a drunken blur?
will you hold my heart in a gentle embrace and protect is from the poison that is relentless in its fight to overcome my senses?
will you free my spirit when i am suffocating under this blanket of lies?
please stay with me and hold me close when i feel hopeless and lost
dont reject me and leave me on the floor bleeding when i can find no other release but death
lend me your wings and fly with me until i can find the sweet exsistance of heaven.

good poem, its different, which is good. I like it bunches....I seem to like a lot of your poems......you must be a good writer...i don't wanna sound like I'm sucking up or anything...but you have good poems

thanx a lot. im glad you liked it. that poem is really special to me, but i know it may not appeal to a lot of people because it really has no rythm. but thats usually how i like to do it. i like making them different. so im really glad that u liked it. which other ones of mine did you like?