:angel: To my little one! :angel:


The Angelz are coming soon to take me away.
My time is up darling and no more can i stay.
From up above in Heavens sky's, i'll look upon you as you prey,
and i'll wait for you my darling, untill it becomes your day.

I'll walk beside you sweetheart, even though, me you'll never see,
Cause deep inside your tender heart, is were i shell be.
So don't cry my little one, not for me,
Cause up in gods kingdom, mummy will still love thee'

I worte this for my daughter, so plz tell me what you all think.

well sumone plz.......... tell me what you think. I had actually stopped posting, cause no-one seems to replie to any of my poems. :confused:

well sum1 plz replie, i'm dying to know what you all think. PLZ!:(

lol
it's a really good poem.. it's a bit sad ;/ I don't know what ima do when my mother dies..

...n wtf you got a kid?!

Stupendous and gentle in words.
Makes life sound more comforting and worthful.
How old's Ur daughter & U if ya dun mind my implorin

thankz sum1 finally replied YEAH. Anyway yes i have a daughter, Her names Kaiara Paris and she's 21 months old. She's such a little :angel: . Just so people know i'm not some old bag, i'm only 17. LOL anyway thankz again.

I love the peom. Its sweet. How do u pronounce your daughters name?

It actually really easy to pronounce, it's spelt Kaiara, but you say like Kiara. I just thought i'd be different and spell it wierd.LOL. I got her name from " The Loin King 2 ", i used to watch that so many times when i was younger. LOL. Thankz for replieing

sorry, i know im late on this, but its really a good poem though. and really sad too...

Thankz Heaps;)

You're not dying, are you, Jaimee??? :(

Originally posted by Ricksta
You're not dying, are you, Jaimee??? :(

i was kind of wondering that too...

Of course i am. Nah I'm only joking, of course i'm not.LOL. It's wierd cause i don't choose the poems that i write, it comes to me and it nags at me till i write it down. Half the time i don't even know what the poems meant to be about. You all probbly have no idea what i'm trying to explain here, but oh well, lets just leave it at i'm STRANGE.LOL

I understand fully I've made several poems that are not really of my division. I jus wrote wat came upon me or made lines that jus sounded really great. Aft the poem was constructd I, then, re-read the whole thing 2 see if it really makes good sense(in a bizaare way) & if it relates with wat I was tryin 2 center the poem on: the main gist
It happens.

P.S.Does NE 1 know Russian words?

Russian? Nope sorry!LOL.;)

Originally posted by HeAvEnLy-SeNt
Of course i am. Nah I'm only joking, of course i'm not.LOL. It's wierd cause i don't choose the poems that i write, it comes to me and it nags at me till i write it down. Half the time i don't even know what the poems meant to be about. You all probbly have no idea what i'm trying to explain here, but oh well, lets just leave it at i'm STRANGE.LOL

I am glad to hear that you aren't dying. You worried me for a while there!