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imported_Shady_chick7
04-21-2002, 10:04 PM
Lets run away together
Keep no track of time
To a place where nobody will find us
Everything will be just fine
Lets run away together
Keep no track of time
You and me forever
Everything will be just fine
Lets run away together
Arm in arm, hand in hand
I'll take you to my special place
In a mysterious far off land
Lets run away together
Deep within my heart
A place where we can spend eternity
A place we'll never part
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I like this one a lot...it's kinda different from the stuff i usually write about so can u guyz please hit me up wit feedback? ~*one*~

imported_Shady_chick7
04-21-2002, 11:51 PM
I say one for wwhen when i wanna say bye..im weird...anyhoo yeah i wuz gonna say that about the second *clears throat* stanza (Ha I used a big word take that Adam Sandler!) yeah i should put the second part at the rnd huh? Thanks Jen for your comments!...What nail...there were nails?

HeAvEnLy-SeNt
04-24-2002, 06:52 AM
Omg i really really loved your poem. Have you ever layed in bed at night and daydreamed about far away places and stuff (i'm pretty wierd) well anyway i do all the time. So your poem is like one of my daydreams writen down. Anyway great poem and keep on posting;)