Falling

Reaching, yearning I'm almost there,
an unknown hope filling my heart thats always bare.
A light, happiness somthing I used to know,
but it's faded away like an old black and white show.
A smile a laugh, the memories start returning,
reaching again an inquistive desire starts burning.
Sparking a ruthless but some how worn and comforting fear,
falling, sinking deeper by each droping tear.
Falling back into a mistakingly made comfort,my own dark place,
I used to come here hiding from the worlds crule reality and a depression I could not face.
But I traped myself in a delousion of a bleek world without emotion trying to hide from my own dispare,
living a life with nothing .....no happiness, no pain,a life with woth nothing , noone seems to notice or care.

I know most of my poems are kinda despesing but their how I feel. This is not one of my better poems but tell me what you think.

Burn

wow, i really liked it... a topic that i haven't seem writen in some time... thanx for sharing it

keep writing

xoxo
fictitious truth

this is really good...it flows nicly....and so what if its depresing....its still good.....besides in my personaly opinion...i think that anything depressing is deep and writen from the hears...therefor..it makes it good....:)

Thanx. Most of the time I think what I wright is crappy ,no self confidence huh? I'm glad sombody liked it.

Whoa!:whoa: That is really good.:) It has a lot of emotion in it and it flows very nicly. Your not alone. I have been diagosed with depression for many years and I still take medicine for it. Anyway, don't let it phase you. Some of my best work was done when I was depressed.

Keep up the good work.:thmbup:

Sincerely,
Iriswings

Thanx. I havent been on for months so I'm checking up on my post.