Im not done with it yet..and its not what I normally write..so hope you enjoy it.


I know this boy,
That I like so much,
but when it comes to him,
I dont have any luck.

he tells me..

I want a gothic girl,
pretty and pale,
wears all black,
and her parents think she'll fail.

she'll like slipknot and I.C.P,
but what he doesnt notice,
is that girl is me,
but im just a friend,
he doesnt realize that im dyeing in his eyes.

so I tell him...

I want a gothic guy,
Hot and punk,
wears spikes and chains,
and his parents think he'll flunk.

he'll like Godsmack and Breaking benjamin,
but what he doesnt notice,
is that that guy is him.
but hes just a friend,
and he doesnt realize that im dyein in his eyes.

I know this boy,
that I like alot,
but he doesnt know,
that hes the only thing I got.

now he tells me,

I found a gothic girl,
shes pretty and pale,
she wears all black,
and her parents think she'll fail,

She likes Iron maiden and The used,
and i finally notice,
that girl is you,
and i realized that your dyein in my eyes.

so I tell him...

I found a gothic guy,
hes hot and punk,
wears spikes and chains,
and his parents think he'll flunk.

he likes Papa Roach and Blink 182,
and I've already realized,
that guy is you.
now im living in your eyes,
now that you've noticed me..I dont have to die.

cute.

^^^^ I agree

thx.

Erg, I don't like the stereotypes, and it seems forced. Like the rhyming and structure. I really didn't like it.

ok..thx for your opinion.