this poem is kinda weird but i think u can get my message
this feeling is so weird
its hard to describe
im not sure its love
our the feeling of regret
first she was a friend nothing more
and then I fucked up
and let her get close to me
knowing well that friendship and relationships
never where suppose to meet
but I know that I do want you
in my life because
the way that you make me feel
is like im the number one person at the time
and to say the truth
you’re the number one girl in my eyes
when im with or without you
but I have to say that you’re the girl of my dreams
with every gasp of breath
ill make sure that your heart
will never be broken
or hurt as long as im breathing
and letting nothing put you in pain any more

Is weird a synonym for a horrible attempt at poetry?

thanks 4 the constructive criticism

i like it.

Eh...it was just pretty cliche and bland. Flower it up a bit.