Sometimes I omit the depth of how much you truely mean to me. You are constantly on my mind. When I'm mad, happy, or sad I am thinking about you. When I sleep, I dream about you. When I am with you an overwhelming sense of serenity takes over me. Something about you compells me to strive to be the absolute best person I can possibly be. Every little thing you do diverts me. No matter how much anguish I am suffering, no matter what amount of zeal I am expressing, nothing compares to the emotions you give me. Some emotions are so fanatic that they scorch my insides and make me quiver. I could be sluggish from ailment, and then suddenly be bouncing off the walls because you have this compelling way about you that changes my mood that is impossible to evade. When my life feels as if it is plummeting toward peril you seem to mend everything. I care about you so immensely that it stums even me. I have no problem conceding that I am nothing without you. You make me beam and glisten. There is nothing about you that I find dreadful. I lavishingly boast about how magnificent you are. Plainly said, I love every little thing about you. i love when you irritate me and I drive me crazy. I love when you do and say the sweetest things ever imaginable. You are my best friend, andI never want to live another day without you. I love you forever, and I will want you always.

stanzas!! :eek2:

It's fucking terrible. But if you're planning on giving it to him that shouldn't be an issue because he apparently has sufficiently poor taste to be attracted to you.

Not all poetry needs stanzas, have you ever heard of poetry in the form of a note/letter?!
And as for "Captain Beefheart", you're not one to speak.