gone.

I like this poem =] It portrays to me a feeling of lost love, which is what I suppose you were going for. The image of poison suggests a slow loss, which seems to fit perfectly with the poem both in terms of what it is trying to portray and the wandering, dulled metre it is written in. Kudos!

Thanks :]

Annnd bump.

great poem!!! my only suggestion would be the ending......give it more closure I guess

bumppp.