You said forever and always
Talked about the future
Now I look back at the days
We spent nood on my furniture

Was is really love
Or just my body
Was I really your shining white dove
Or was I too slutty

My brains confused
At what to do
I don’t ever wanna
Let go of you

Butterflies in my tummy
That start up whenever we kiss
Sparks that fly like bees to hunny
Never have I felt like this

Forever and always
Your baby I’ll be
Hurt me not
And you’ll have forever and always with me

Never write again.

Never write again.

Needs work.
The first three stanza's were bad
The forth was alright but that's all.

Never write again.

^^

Sad.

what!?!?!?
i actually REALLY loved this....
maybe because i can relate,but this is honestly very amazing

wow sorry i know u have more to say but ur trying ti rhym! poetry doesnt need to rhym it just needs to flow. it just needs to be what u really feel. keep writing. this could be something so much more.