something i just jotted down.
hopefully work on it a little.




oh, my love for you.

a dying rose,
sheading its final beauty,
as the sun goes down.

oh, my love for you,
a final kiss on soft skin,
before falling into slumber.

oh, my love for you,
as delicate as the petal,
your serene skin;
i caress.

oh, my love for you,
radiant beauty;
i wish to wake unto,
to watch the morning light,
hypnotize me in your eyes.

oh, my love for you.

you rush into the poem..maybe start by describing how you feel without saying 'oh my love for u' straight at the begining, its a powerful verse..too strong for the first one

ok, now lets pretend thats the title ?