you may think its sad but i write things about how i feel see if you can see how i feel from my words and what i have been through !!!


It’s hard to believe people when they say they actually know how you feel
But some actually do know how you feel
I understand feeling as small and as insignificant as humanly possible
And how it can actually ache in places that you didn’t no you had in side you
And it doesn’t matter how many hair cuts you get or how many gyms you join
Or how many glasses or wine you drink with your girlfriends
You still go to bed every night going over every detail
And wonder what you did wrong
And how you could of misunderstood
And how in the hell for that brief moment
You could think that you were that happy
And sometimes you can even convince yourself that he’ll see the light and show up at your door
And after all that however long all that maybe
You’ll go somewhere new
And you’ll meet people who make you feel worth while again
And little pieces of your soul will finally come back
And all that fuzzy stuff and those years of your life you wasted
Will all eventually begin to fade.


For some love fades
For others love is simply lost
But then of course love can also be found even if jus for the night
And then there is another kind of love
The cruellest kind
The one that almost kills its victims
Most love stories or books that you read are of those which fall in love with each other
But It’s Those who fall in love alone
The ones who seem to fall in love with whom you think is the right guy
And isn’t so right in the end.
All those years you spent with that guy
The birthdays
The Christmas’s
The new years brought in with tears instead of happiness
All those years you wasted
All because you thought you loved someone
When they could not and will not love you back.

Your eyes weep with despair
But it changes soon as you see right
Your eyes become filled of hatred.
You forget all those years you wasted
And you move on
And that one random day
Were you think that you have given up on men
You bump into that right person
You don’t think anything from it
But it turns out to be that man who you really do fall deeply in love with and
They fall truly and deeply in love with you
It mite feel unreal but it is most definitely true
So forget the past don’t expect the past to run your future
Don’t let things that you’re past have made you feel
Think the same about the man who is stood right in front of you.
Let everyday be an adventure
Let it be your life
and you can only make your wishes come true
So let me tell you now I love you

sorry about spelling some may be wrong cos havent really checked through it but let me no what you think guys would really appreciate that ... by the way this might come better across to girls

It's probably not great, but I am too lazy to read that shit.

thought not many guys would read it ... ohh well thanks any ways

lol....taste my blood is a chick

?????? what lol

there is a forum for this sort of thing. Go learn about teenspot before you start posting.

lol....taste my blood is a chick
Hahahaha.

It's probably not great, but I am too lazy to read that shit.

It's probably not great, but I am too lazy to read that shit.

Just some poetry basics:
Get rid of any syllables unnecessary to the piece... this includes redundancy, which this poem seems to have a lot of.

Please, please, please use punctuation- although many standard grammatical rules don't apply to poetry, you still need a purpose for everything you do in the piece. Unless there's a reason for the lack of punctuation, use punctuation that is appropriate and makes sense in the piece. The same thing goes with capitalization- don't just capitalize every line because it seems like the "poetic thing to do"... actually think about why you're capitalizing certain words.

Avoid using words and phrases that are overused, chiche, and nondescript. Everything that's needed to be said in this world has already been said- it's your job as a poet to find new and interesting ways to express old ideas.