Let Blood be thou Water,
and Bone be thy Bread
The Dark Knights are coming to fill thee with dread,
So take up thou arms, and fight with thy will
fore thou only fight for the joy of the Kill!!!

what do ya think?¿?
I wrote it last year for my english class.... idk....

The thous and thys aren't working. The type of language you attempted to use essentially destroyed your good intentions.

Thine thine thine

MIDDLE ENGLISH, MOTHERFUCKER, DO YOU SPEAK IT?

ok thanks.... I was just trying to give it a midieval theme kinda..... I'll see what I can do... tks

This doesn't have anything to do with Batman =(