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Daylen-Dakky
10-29-2008, 01:12 PM
The children run and shout as the candy is given by others...

They go out with friends and sisters and brothers...

Followed by parents and black cats and dogs...

The night is cold and there is frost on the logs...

Some are witches and others are demons with glowing eyes...

Now they are waiting for the next great trick or surprise...

They chant and they laugh as they run in the streets...

Covered in make up and masks and old sheets...

Oh look that guy got run over I hope he is alright...

You best be careful on this halloween night...


There, just thought I'd share this little poem I cobbled together! Have a great halloween everyone!

Scream_for_the_dream
10-29-2008, 05:24 PM
tht was pretty good
i was expectin something rlly lame, idk y
but it was actually good

Daylen-Dakky
10-30-2008, 02:12 PM
tht was pretty good
i was expectin something rlly lame, idk y
but it was actually good


Thanks, I appreciate feedback always!

Tan_yah
10-30-2008, 02:42 PM
The children run and shout as the candy is given by others...

They go out with friends and sisters and brothers...

Followed by parents and black cats and dogs...

The night is cold and there is frost on the logs...

Some are witches and others are demons with glowing eyes...

Now they are waiting for the next great trick or surprise...

They chant and they laugh as they run in the streets...

Covered in make up and masks and old sheets...

Oh look that guy got run over I hope he is alright...

You best be careful on this halloween night...


There, just thought I'd share this little poem I cobbled together! Have a great halloween everyone!

Thank you.

But the poem wasn't that great.