The Walk
I used to walk alone
On this empty
Gravel path
Yearning for someone
To see inside me
You found me
But only for a little while
I spent days and nights
Which turned to sunless years
Trying to find you
Now that I have
You still are the same
Person who saw inside of me
That day
Oh so many
Years ago

Nice.

I liked it.
But if I were to critique it I'd say that the way it was structured made it a bit choppy to read.
It was easy to realate to, however.