let me know what you guys think....



i hope we dont turn out like the trees in autumn

falling apart and changin as the times grow cold

maybe its just there way of renewing something that got old

something that has to fall apart only to become better the next time around

but what am i supposed to learn from them

there beauty and strength is such a mystery

but at the same time so plain to see

i guess ill just have to wait and see

ill just have to pray that the good times never end

but one thing is for sure i cant go back to who i used to be

i cant make that change just to see a new side

that past has already sprung new life

a new love that came from the last cold breeze....

for now...i just wait...

i have the warmth on my side and the sun in my eyes

promising to never let darkness over come our leaves...

woah woah woah.

Before any comments can be made on your writing style, I couldn't get through it because of all the misspellings of "their" and lack of punctuation and capital letters.

Putting those things aside, what I did read was interesting, I like the connections you made between the autumn trees and falling apart, very clever.

yea i understand that but i dont take my time in writing them they are done in like a few minutes top...finished pieces are looked over many times...trust me but thanks for reading...

thats actually really good. you should make a book with your poetry and quotes.
you could actually be famous for that. your really really good.

hey thanks i appreciate it and yea i have a few books that i write in and if i could be famous one day for doin something i love that would be awesome!!

woah woah woah.

Before any comments can be made on your writing style, I couldn't get through it because of all the misspellings of "their" and lack of punctuation and capital letters.

Putting those things aside, what I did read was interesting, I like the connections you made between the autumn trees and falling apart, very clever.

yea i understand that but i dont take my time in writing them they are done in like a few minutes top...finished pieces are looked over many times...trust me but thanks for reading...

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