It's not really any specific category of writing, I just wanted to share.. I just wrote it in the last 5 mins and thoughts and feelings on it would be appreciated. I spilt it up a bit to make it easier to read.



Words fail me when I try to describe how failed I feel by you. For you everything I give means nothing. I am no value to you, just a use. But I cave, trying to make this time as easy as I can. I hope when I go I have to guts to tell you how I feel, but for selfish reasons, I won't.

You, personally are all that is wrong with this. There's nothing wrong with me. I know friendship, I know intelligence, I know care, loyalty and you, you are none. You fly to the ones who will hurt others, so your "precious" inside won't get damaged. The exterior constantly gaining enemies, growing more ugly by the second.

And I can't wait to be away, all the mess, hurt, ridiculous logic and lack of conscience. Soon, I WILL be free. And, until that day, I will quietly feel pity for the person you could have been, but never became. To our goodbye - the time cannot come soon enough.


xoxjubixox

beautiful
i can relate to some of those things as well
i feel sad and the sympathy in it

It's not really any specific category of writing, I just wanted to share.. I just wrote it in the last 5 mins and thoughts and feelings on it would be appreciated. I spilt it up a bit to make it easier to read.



Words fail me when I try to describe how failed I feel by you. For you everything I give means nothing. I am no value to you, just a use. But I cave, trying to make this time as easy as I can. I hope when I go I have to guts to tell you how I feel, but for selfish reasons, I won't.

You, personally are all that is wrong with this. There's nothing wrong with me. I know friendship, I know intelligence, I know care, loyalty and you, you are none. You fly to the ones who will hurt others, so your "precious" inside won't get damaged. The exterior constantly gaining enemies, growing more ugly by the second.

And I can't wait to be away, all the mess, hurt, ridiculous logic and lack of conscience. Soon, I WILL be free. And, until that day, I will quietly feel pity for the person you could have been, but never became. To our goodbye - the time cannot come soon enough. Karma, come

You are quite the writer, and I love that line.
Julian Lennon wrote something similar to it once.

You are quite the writer, and I love that line.
Julian Lennon wrote something similar to it once.

Thank you.

Writing has always come naturally to me, and I find when I have something, or in this case, someone to write about the result comes out better than it would otherwise.

Any more opinions, improvements I could make on my writing style?

It's really good and not too deep i like it babes

Thank you.

Writing has always come naturally to me, and I find when I have something, or in this case, someone to write about the result comes out better than it would otherwise.

You are welcome.

And yeah, I could tell that it was based off of a personal experience.

http://www.teenspot.com/boards/showthread.html?t=346639

http://www.teenspot.com/boards/showthread.html?t=346639

Ahh.


bump.