Cassydiddles
08-29-2008, 12:40 AM
This is not so good, but I thought I'd try not ryming.
If you know any way I could get better, then please let me know. If you wanna rewrite it, go ahead. This is just an experiment. So yeah.
A young girl stood there
The age of sixteen
Her vibrant blue eyes
Now reflect yellow
The pain in her face
As she falls to he knees
The movement under her skin
Pushes and tears through
And there to the left
A white feathered wing stained
And there to her right
A black wing in chains
She embraces the pain
As the transition occurs
She'll stand to her feet
The dark to the light
And light to the dark
Neither is alone
Another change begins
The right of her being
A metomorphisis
The half of her body
And she becomes he
His hair turned to dark
As hers turns to light
Light and dark are always together
If you know any way I could get better, then please let me know. If you wanna rewrite it, go ahead. This is just an experiment. So yeah.
A young girl stood there
The age of sixteen
Her vibrant blue eyes
Now reflect yellow
The pain in her face
As she falls to he knees
The movement under her skin
Pushes and tears through
And there to the left
A white feathered wing stained
And there to her right
A black wing in chains
She embraces the pain
As the transition occurs
She'll stand to her feet
The dark to the light
And light to the dark
Neither is alone
Another change begins
The right of her being
A metomorphisis
The half of her body
And she becomes he
His hair turned to dark
As hers turns to light
Light and dark are always together