"I was loved before, but, death took her away from me!!:cry:

Now i tell u the story about my life going straight to hell!!!:cry: "



"Shadows are behind everything including our souls....

and that tell's me even angel's have a dark-side too"


"When god made life he made a mistake, he made death.....

so it's god's fault that makes people die"


"Vampire's are the oppisite of angel's, but, are still the same....

love carries a price called being crushed by yur love"


"We are seperated by life, but, we come together by death....

blood is a way vampire's love eachother too"


"But we all have a price to pay to make sure that we go somewhere nice....

or that we can also choose a way to get pass death"


"And if people want to see wat i mean, just reply on: paintedsoul!!!"......."I will show u the way to power and get passed the way of following yur way to death!!!"

No offence, but I don't really like it. Some of it seems poetic.. Other parts just seem like your rambling.

That is just my opinion...

Maybe you should edit it in some places.

ahaaaaaa painted soul my new favourite :pink:

thanks for sharing.